EHR Proposal Summary
A memo to a named reader who asked a practical question. Audience and register are part of the grade here, and an essay on EHR benefits answers a different brief.
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Last reviewed · August 22, 2026
A memo to a named reader with a practical problem
The framing is the assignment. Someone with a specific job has asked a specific question, and what she needs is a decision she can act on rather than an overview of health informatics. That sets the register: address her directly, lead with the recommendation, keep the paragraphs short, and stay inside 700 words. It also sets the scope, because a small doctor's office is not a hospital system and advantages that only appear at scale will not persuade her. Practically that means leading with the problems she already has: charts that go missing, handwriting that has to be checked by telephone, refill requests that need someone to walk to a filing cabinet, and insurance claims returned for missing documentation. A memo that begins with her Tuesday morning and works outward will be read to the end; one that begins with the national picture will not, and the word limit gives you no room to recover from a slow start.
Separate functions from advantages, since the brief names both and they are not the same. Functions are what the system does: structured storage of demographics, problems, medications and allergies; order entry and results review; e-prescribing; scheduling and billing integration; reporting; and a patient portal. Advantages are what follows for this office: legibility eliminating transcription error, one record accessible to several staff at once instead of a chart that can only be in one place, automated interaction and allergy checking at the moment of prescribing, recall lists for overdue screening, faster claims with fewer rejections, and less physical storage. Use one concrete example, as the brief asks, and make it a scene from her office rather than an abstraction. Being honest about cost, training time and the productivity dip during transition will make the memo more persuasive, not less, because a manager who discovers those afterwards discounts everything else you told her.
Likely learning objectives
- Write to a named non-technical reader with a decision to make.
- Separate system functions from the advantages they produce.
- Scale the argument to a small practice rather than a hospital.
- Include costs honestly to preserve the memo's credibility.
Assignment instructions
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Imagine you are working at a doctor’s office. You are approached by the office manager, who asks you to develop an effective way of storing patient information. Write a 350- to 700-word summary to your office manager informing her of the advantages of using electronic health records (EHRs) to store patient information. Be clear and concise, use complete sentences, and use examples to support your responses. Include the following in your response: Discuss the functions and advantages of using EHRs. Discuss three to four forms used to keep patient information in EHRs. What is the purpose of each form? EHR Proposal Summary The Research paper -Students are required to submit 2 research papers in the semester, the first due in week eight, the second in week15. Late papers will lose a grade for each day it is late. Each paper will be a minimum of 15 pages in length. Note that this is to be a critical analysis with research, and not a diary, personal opinions are elicited, but confessional meanderings are not. The degree to which a student may become extremely personal is the degree to which the ideas of the class can be brought to bear upon the utterances in a critical manner. All Research papers are to be typed, in manuscript format. The Publication Manual of the American Psychological Association is the source, in the Graduate Communication Arts Department for format and citation techniques. Note that this technique is somewhat different from the MLA style usually taught in most English classes. Each journal will outline the major ideas of the textbook assigned for that period and will relate those ideas to the needs of contemporary communication within the scope and techniques of the course. You should use outside research (a minimum of 10 sources) to examine and analyze the relevant points of the text. Using the lecture notes to aid you, please expand on the ideas of the text by looking into the future of our industry and predicting its impact on our society. No less than 15% and no more than 25% of your paper should be quoted material Grading Rubric – Tips on writing your Research paper The assignment for each paper will be graded on the following: Five or so topics discussed in the text (each from a different chapter) applied to today’s world and the Mass Media – Lecture notes and discussions should be included –10 points Your 10 resources and quotes from other experts’ -5 points Update of the texts ideas- 5 points New / original ideas/ Incite into impact on our society -5points Points will be taken off for the following: All papers are to be typed, in manuscript format. APA–minus 2 points if not done Late- minus 1 point per day 15 pages-minus 1 point for each page under 15 pages Approximately 20% of your paper should be quotations. Penalty for having more than 25% quotations or less than 15% could result in failure
Turn the brief into deliverables
- 01A memo addressed to the office manager, in memo register.
- 02A clear recommendation stated early.
- 03The functions of an EHR, listed as capabilities.
- 04Advantages specific to a small doctor's office.
- 05At least one concrete example from her setting.
- 06An honest note on cost, training and transition.
- 07350 to 700 words.
Functions, then advantages tied to this office
The recommendation, first
State what you are advising before explaining it.
What the assessor is likely looking for
A recommendation a reader could act on without reading further.
What the system does
List the functions of an EHR as capabilities of the software.
What the assessor is likely looking for
Functions described as what the system does, not as benefits.
What that means for this office
Translate each relevant function into an advantage at this scale.
What the assessor is likely looking for
An advantage that would be visible in a small practice.
One example she would recognise
Give a scene from her own office where the change would show.
What the assessor is likely looking for
A specific everyday situation rather than a general scenario.
What it will cost her
State licence and hardware cost, training time and the transition dip.
What the assessor is likely looking for
Costs named plainly rather than minimised.
Where EHR functions and evidence are documented
Recommended databases
- HealthIT.gov
- PubMed Central
- AHRQ
- University Library
Search sequence
- 1.Confirm the standard function list from an authoritative source.
- 2.Look for evidence of EHR benefits in small or ambulatory practices specifically.
- 3.Find the reported productivity effect during implementation.
- 4.Check what medication safety benefits are actually demonstrated.
Reference shortlist
These are authoritative starting points, not a ready-made bibliography. A qualified reviewer must confirm that each source fits the assignment and supports the claim beside which it is cited.
Interoperability
Office of the National Coordinator for Health Information Technology · 2024
What health records are expected to do, for the functions section.
Medication Errors and Adverse Drug Events
AHRQ Patient Safety Network · 2024
Medication error prevention, for the prescribing safety advantage.
Implementing electronic health records in hospitals: a systematic literature review
BMC Health Services Research · 2014
Implementation review, for the transition cost you should disclose.
Facilitators and Barriers to Implementing a Patient Portal at a Dental Hospital From the Implementers' Perspective
Journal of Medical Internet Research · 2025
Patient portal facilitators and barriers, for the portal function at practice scale.
The association between perceived electronic health record usability and professional burnout among US nurses
Journal of the American Medical Informatics Association, 28(8), 1632-1641 · 2021
Usability and burnout, for an honest account of the burden the system adds.
Before you submit this memo
Common mistakes
- Writing an academic essay instead of a memo to a named reader.
- Merging functions and advantages into one list.
- Arguing from hospital-scale benefits that do not apply to a small office.
- Omitting cost and disruption, which makes the memo read as a sales pitch.
- Using an abstract example rather than a scene from her practice.
Submission checklist
- Is it addressed to her and written as a memo?
- Is the recommendation in the first paragraph?
- Are functions and advantages separated?
- Is there a concrete example from her office?
- Have you named the costs as well as the benefits?
Use this guide to plan and review your own work. Follow your institution's rules and read Brinevia's academic-integrity policy.
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Maren Caldwell
MSN, RN, CNE
Medical-surgical nursing, pharmacology and NCLEX preparation
Maren is a registered nurse with over 15 years of clinical and educational experience in medical-surgical nursing. She writes on NCLEX preparation, patient care fundamentals, pharmacology and evidence-based practice.

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