NRS 430 Week 1 Discussion 2 What do you look forward to as you begin this educational experience and your personal search for purpose?
A first-week reflection that still demands two references and one peer-reviewed article. The way through is to notice that the story you are asked for — a past fear you overcame — is a named construct in the literature.
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How to cite scholarship in a post about yourself
This looks like an icebreaker and it is graded like a scholarly post, which is the whole problem. The prompt asks what you look forward to, what you most fear, how you would overcome it, and for one specific past educational experience in which you faced a fear and succeeded.
Every part of that is about you. Meanwhile the course rules require a minimum of 150 words, at least two references with one a peer-reviewed journal article, in-text citations, no quotations, and APA 7th edition, with points deducted otherwise.
Students resolve that tension badly in one of two ways: they write a warm personal post with no citations and lose marks mechanically, or they bolt a generic citation about 'nursing education' onto a paragraph it has nothing to do with.
There is a clean way through, and it comes from noticing what you are actually being asked for. A past experience in which you confronted a fear and succeeded through effort is not just an anecdote — it is a mastery experience, the term Bandura uses for the most powerful of the four sources of self-efficacy.
The other three are vicarious experience (seeing people like you succeed), verbal persuasion (credible people telling you that you can), and your physiological and emotional states (reading your own racing heart as either threat or readiness).
That framework is doing real work for you here, not decorating the post: it gives you a citable structure for the fear question, a reason your past experience is relevant rather than merely nice, and a vocabulary for the 'how can you overcome it' question that goes beyond determination.
So answer the fear question through the framework. If your fear is clinical skills, the evidence says the route is graded mastery — supervised practice with feedback and progressive independence — not reassurance. If it is that you are older or less prepared than your cohort, the relevant source is vicarious experience, and the action is finding people like you who did it. Naming the source and the matching strategy turns 'I will work hard and stay positive' into an answer with a mechanism.
One honest caveat is worth including and will strengthen the post rather than weaken it. The strategies aligned to those four sources have been tested experimentally, and used individually none of them significantly improved performance; only the combined package did, with medium-to-large effects on self-efficacy and anxiety. So a plan that rests on one tactic is weaker than a plan that combines them, and saying so shows you read the evidence rather than the summary.
On the specific past experience: the prompt says one and says specific. A single experience told concretely — what the fear was, what you actually did, what changed — beats three sketched ones. Say what you did, not that you 'pushed through', because the mechanism is the part that transfers to nursing school.
And keep the fear real. A polished non-fear like 'I fear I care too much' costs you the whole point of the exercise, since the post is meant to set up a strategy you will actually use.
Finally, note the format detail that quietly loses marks: no quotes. Everything must be paraphrased and cited. On a reflective post the temptation to drop in a nice quotation about courage is high, and it is explicitly penalised here.
Likely learning objectives
- Connect personal reflection to an established theoretical construct, so that a required peer-reviewed citation is integral to the argument rather than bolted on.
- Identify which source of self-efficacy a particular fear implicates, and select the strategy matched to that source rather than a general resolution to work hard.
- Narrate one specific past experience with enough mechanism that the transferable part is visible, since the prompt asks for one specific experience rather than several.
- Likely assessed on whether all four parts of the prompt are answered, given that the fear, the strategy and the past experience are separately named.
- Tends to be rewarded when the limits of the evidence are acknowledged, since strategies of this kind have been shown to work in combination rather than individually.
Assignment instructions
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What do you look forward to as you begin this educational experience and your personal search for purpose? What is your greatest fear? How can you overcome it? Write about one specific educational experience from your past in which you addressed a fear and overcame it and how you succeeded in this process.
Course-wide instructions that accompany this question
Important information for writing discussion questions and participation Hi Class, Please read through the following information on writing a Discussion question response and participation posts. Contact me if you have any questions. Important information on Writing a Discussion Question Your response needs to be a minimum of 150 words (not including your list of references) There needs to be at least TWO references with ONE being a peer reviewed professional journal article. Include in-text citations in your response Do not include quotes—instead summarize and paraphrase the information Follow APA-7th edition Points will be deducted if the above is not followed Participation –replies to your classmates or instructor A minimum of 6 responses per week, on at least 3 days of the week. Each response needs at least ONE reference with citations—best if it is a peer reviewed journal article Each response needs to be at least 75 words in length (does not include your list of references) Responses need to be substantive by bringing information to the discussion or further enhance the discussion. Responses of “I agree” or “great post” does not count for the word count. Follow APA 7th edition Points will be deducted if the above is not followed Remember to use and follow APA-7th edition for all weekly assignments, discussion questions, and participation points. Here are some helpful links Student paper example Citing Sources The Writing Center is a great resource Welcome to class Hello class and welcome to the class and I will be your instructor for this course. This is a -week course and requires a lot of time commitment, organization, and a high level of dedication. Please use the class syllabus to guide you through all the assignments required for the course. 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NRS 430 Week 1 Discussion 2 What do you look forward to as you begin this educational experience and your personal search for purpose Your initial discussion post should be a minimum of 200 words and response posts should be a minimum of 150 words. Be advised that I grade based on quality and not necessarily the number of words you post. A minimum of TWO references should be used for your initial post. For your response post, you do not need references as personal experiences would count as response posts. If you however cite anything from the literature for your response post, it is required that you cite your reference. You should include a minimum of THREE references for papers in this course. Please note that references should be no more than 5 years old except recommended as a resource for the class. Furthermore, for each discussion board question, you need ONE initial substantive response and TWO substantive responses to either your classmates or your instructor for a total of THREE responses. There are TWO discussion questions each week, hence, you need a total minimum of SIX discussion posts for each week. I usually post a discussion question each week. You could also respond to these as it would count towards your required SIX discussion posts for the week. I understand this is a lot of information to cover in 5 weeks, however, the Bible says in Philippians 4:13 that we can do all things through Christ that strengthens us. Even in times like this, we are encouraged by God’s word that we have that ability in us to succeed with His strength. I pray that each and every one of you receives strength for this course and life generally as we navigate through this pandemic that is shaking our world today. Relax and enjoy the course! Name: Discussion Rubric Grid View List View Excellent 90–100 Good 80–89 Fair 70–79 Poor 0–69 Main Posting: Response to the Discussion question is reflective with critical analysis and synthesis representative of knowledge gained from the course readings for the module and current credible sources. 40 (40%) – 44 (44%) Thoroughly responds to the Discussion question(s). Is reflective with critical analysis and synthesis representative of knowledge gained from the course readings for the module and current credible sources. No less than 75% of post has exceptional depth and breadth. Supported by at least three current credible sources. 35 (35%) – 39 (39%) Responds to most of the Discussion question(s). Is somewhat reflective with critical analysis and synthesis representative of knowledge gained from the course readings for the module. 50% of the post has exceptional depth and breadth. Supported by at least three credible references. 31 (31%) – 34 (34%) Responds to some of the Discussion question(s). One to two criteria are not addressed or are superficially addressed. Is somewhat lacking reflection and critical analysis and synthesis. Somewhat represents knowledge gained from the course readings for the module. Cited with fewer than two credible references. 0 (0%) – 30 (30%) Does not respond to the Discussion question(s). Lacks depth or superficially addresses criteria. Lacks reflection and critical analysis and synthesis. Does not represent knowledge gained from the course readings for the module. Contains only one or no credible references. Main Posting: Writing 6 (6%) – 6 (6%) Written clearly and concisely. Contains no grammatical or spelling errors. Adheres to current APA manual writing rules and style. 5 (5%) – 5 (5%) Written concisely. May contain one to two grammatical or spelling errors. Adheres to current APA manual writing rules and style. 4 (4%) – 4 (4%) Written somewhat concisely. May contain more than two spelling or grammatical errors. Contains some APA formatting errors. 0 (0%) – 3 (3%) Not written clearly or concisely. Contains more than two spelling or grammatical errors. Does not adhere to current APA manual writing rules and style. Main Posting: Timely and full participation 9 (9%) – 10 (10%) Meets requirements for timely, full, and active participation. Posts main Discussion by due date. 8 (8%) – 8 (8%) Meets requirements for full participation. Posts main Discussion by due date. 7 (7%) – 7 (7%) Posts main Discussion by due date. 0 (0%) – 6 (6%) Does not meet requirements for full participation. Does not post main Discussion by due date. First Response: Post to colleague’s main post that is reflective and justified with credible sources. 9 (9%) – 9 (9%) Response exhibits critical thinking and application to practice settings. Responds to questions posed by faculty. The use of scholarly sources to support ideas demonstrates synthesis and understanding of learning objectives. 8 (8%) – 8 (8%) Response has some depth and may exhibit critical thinking or application to practice setting. 7 (7%) – 7 (7%) Response is on topic and may have some depth. 0 (0%) – 6 (6%) Response may not be on topic and lacks depth. First Response: Writing 6 (6%) – 6 (6%) Communication is professional and respectful to colleagues. Response to faculty questions are fully answered, if posed. Provides clear, concise opinions and ideas that are supported by two or more credible sources. Response is effectively written in standard, edited English. 5 (5%) – 5 (5%) Communication is mostly professional and respectful to colleagues. Response to faculty questions are mostly answered, if posed. Provides opinions and ideas that are supported by few credible sources. Response is written in standard, edited English. 4 (4%) – 4 (4%) Response posed in the Discussion may lack effective professional communication. Response to faculty questions are somewhat answered, if posed. Few or no credible sources are cited. 0 (0%) – 3 (3%) Responses posted in the Discussion lack effective communication. Response to faculty questions are missing. No credible sources are cited. First Response: Timely and full participation 5 (5%) – 5 (5%) Meets requirements for timely, full, and active participation. Posts by due date. 4 (4%) – 4 (4%) Meets requirements for full participation. Posts by due date. 3 (3%) – 3 (3%) Posts by due date. 0 (0%) – 2 (2%) Does not meet requirements for full participation. Does not post by due date. Second Response: Post to colleague’s main post that is reflective and justified with credible sources. 9 (9%) – 9 (9%) Response exhibits critical thinking and application to practice settings. Responds to questions posed by faculty. The use of scholarly sources to support ideas demonstrates synthesis and understanding of learning objectives. 8 (8%) – 8 (8%) Response has some depth and may exhibit critical thinking or application to practice setting. 7 (7%) – 7 (7%) Response is on topic and may have some depth. 0 (0%) – 6 (6%) Response may not be on topic and lacks depth. Second Response: Writing 6 (6%) – 6 (6%) Communication is professional and respectful to colleagues. Response to faculty questions are fully answered, if posed. Provides clear, concise opinions and ideas that are supported by two or more credible sources. Response is effectively written in standard, edited English. 5 (5%) – 5 (5%) Communication is mostly professional and respectful to colleagues. Response to faculty questions are mostly answered, if posed. Provides opinions and ideas that are supported by few credible sources. Response is written in standard, edited English. 4 (4%) – 4 (4%) Response posed in the Discussion may lack effective professional communication. Response to faculty questions are somewhat answered, if posed. Few or no credible sources are cited. 0 (0%) – 3 (3%) Responses posted in the Discussion lack effective communication. Response to faculty questions are missing. No credible sources are cited. Second Response: Timely and full participation 5 (5%) – 5 (5%) Meets requirements for timely, full, and active participation. Posts by due date. 4 (4%) – 4 (4%) Meets requirements for full participation. Posts by due date. 3 (3%) – 3 (3%) Posts by due date. 0 (0%) – 2 (2%) Does not meet requirements for full participation. Does not post by due date. Total Points: 100 Name: Discussion Rubric
What NRS 430 Week 1 DQ 2 requires, including the format rules
- 01What you look forward to as you begin this educational experience and your personal search for purpose.
- 02Your greatest fear, and how you can overcome it.
- 03One specific educational experience from your past in which you addressed a fear and overcame it, including how you succeeded in that process.
- 04Minimum 150 words, not counting the reference list (course instructions).
- 05At least two references, at least one of which is a peer-reviewed professional journal article, with in-text citations (course instructions).
- 06No quotations — summarise and paraphrase only. APA 7th edition. Points are deducted if these are not followed (course instructions).
- 07Separately: a minimum of six participation responses per week across at least three days, each at least 75 words with at least one reference (course instructions).
Structuring the purpose, fear and mastery story
What you look forward to, tied to purpose
Answer the first question concretely — a specific aspect of the programme or of nursing practice, and what draws you to it. Connect it to the search for purpose the prompt names rather than treating them as two separate questions.
What the assessor is likely looking for
That anticipation is expressed as something specific about this profession rather than as generic enthusiasm, since the question pairs it explicitly with a search for purpose.
Name the fear honestly and precisely
State one real fear in concrete terms — a particular clinical situation, the academic load alongside work, being the oldest in the cohort. Precision here determines whether the next section can say anything useful.
What the assessor is likely looking for
That a genuine and specific fear is named rather than a socially safe non-fear, because the strategy section depends entirely on what the fear actually is.
Choose the peer-reviewed article before you draft
Find the journal article first, not last. The course requires at least one peer-reviewed professional article, and a reflection is the hardest kind of post to attach one to — so let the article you find shape which fear you write about, rather than writing the post and hunting for a citation to bolt on afterwards. Search the construct (self-efficacy, transition, coping) rather than the feeling.
What the assessor is likely looking for
That the peer-reviewed source is genuinely load-bearing in the argument rather than decorative, since an unrelated citation satisfies the letter of the requirement while demonstrating none of the reading it exists to evidence.
Match a strategy to the source of the fear
Classify your fear against the sources of self-efficacy and choose the matching route: graded mastery with feedback for skills fears, vicarious models for belonging fears, reappraisal for anxiety-state fears. Cite the framework.
What the assessor is likely looking for
That the strategy is derived from a named mechanism rather than asserted as effort or positive thinking, which is where the required peer-reviewed citation earns its place.
Tell the one past experience with its mechanism
Give a single specific episode: the fear, what you actually did, and what changed as a result. Name the actions, not the resolve — the actions are what transfer to this programme.
What the assessor is likely looking for
That exactly one experience is told specifically, as the prompt requires, and that the account explains how success was achieved rather than only that it was.
Close on the plan, with its limits
State how you will apply this in the programme, combining more than one strategy. Acknowledge briefly that single tactics are weaker than combined ones, which is what the experimental evidence shows.
What the assessor is likely looking for
That the reflection ends in an applied plan rather than a sentiment, and that any claim about what works is proportionate to the evidence cited.
Plan the six participation replies
The replies are graded separately from this post and are easy to under-plan: six responses per week, spread across at least three separate days, each at least 75 words and each carrying at least one citation. Decide now which days you will post and keep two or three sources in reserve so a reply is never citation-less.
What the assessor is likely looking for
That the participation requirement is treated as a scheduled, sourced obligation rather than as afterthought agreement, since 'I agree' and 'great post' are explicitly excluded from the word count.
Finding evidence that fits a reflective post
Recommended databases
- CINAHL Complete
- PubMed
- PsycINFO
- ERIC
Search sequence
- 1.Search the construct, not the feeling: 'self-efficacy' and 'nursing students' will return peer-reviewed work, where 'fear of nursing school' will not.
- 2.Pick the peer-reviewed journal article first, since the course rules require at least one and it is the harder of the two references to satisfy.
- 3.Match the source of self-efficacy to your specific fear before searching for strategies, so the evidence you cite is about your situation rather than about students in general.
- 4.Look for studies that report null or partial results as well as positive ones — they are what let you make a bounded claim instead of an enthusiastic one.
- 5.Check the publication is a journal article rather than an editorial or a book chapter if you are relying on it to meet the peer-reviewed requirement.
Reference shortlist
These are authoritative starting points, not a ready-made bibliography. A qualified reviewer must confirm that each source fits the assignment and supports the claim beside which it is cited.
Self-Efficacy in a Nursing Context
Health Promotion in Health Care - Vital Theories and Research, Springer (NCBI Bookshelf) · 2021
The clearest statement of Bandura's four sources — mastery experiences, vicarious experiences, verbal persuasion, and altering negative emotional and physiological states — applied directly to nursing. Use it for the framework. Note it is a book chapter, so it will not satisfy the peer-reviewed journal article requirement on its own.
Self-Efficacy in Nursing Students
Nursing and Midwifery Studies, 3(4), e25881 · 2014
Reports that higher occupational self-efficacy predicts both higher final marks and higher rates of programme completion, and links low self-efficacy to attrition and to reduced initiative in practice. This is the citation that makes your fear discussion consequential rather than personal. It is an editorial, so check whether your instructor counts it toward the peer-reviewed requirement.
Better together: Effects of four self-efficacy-building strategies on online statistical learning
Contemporary Educational Psychology, 63 · 2020
A peer-reviewed experimental study, and the strongest candidate for the required journal article. It found that no single self-efficacy strategy significantly improved performance alone, while the combined package did (d = 0.696 for self-efficacy, d = -0.534 for anxiety). Cite it for the bounded claim that a combined plan beats a single tactic. The setting is online statistics learning, not nursing, so name that limitation.
Coping strategies used by undergraduate first-year nursing students during transition from basic to higher education: a qualitative study
BMC Nursing, 23 · 2024
The closest study to this prompt's actual situation: first-year nursing students in transition, and the six coping approaches they used — adaptive, appraisal-focused, emotion-focused, problem-focused, social, and seeking mentorship. Use it to make your 'how can you overcome it' answer a named strategy with evidence behind it rather than a resolution. Qualitative and single-country, so describe it as one cohort's experience, not a general finding.
Examining Factors Associated with Attrition, Strategies for Retention Among Undergraduate Nursing Students, and Identified Research Gaps: A Scoping Review
Nursing Reports, 15(6) · 2025
Why the fear question is worth answering seriously: this review groups attrition drivers into academic, institutional/social support, personal and economic themes, and reports that insufficient social support is one of the most critical non-academic predictors of attrition. Cite it if your fear is about support or belonging rather than academics — it shows the fear is a documented risk factor, not a personal failing.
Checking the post against the deduction list
Common mistakes
- Writing a warm personal post with no citations. The course rules require two references with one peer-reviewed, and points are deducted mechanically regardless of how good the reflection is.
- Bolting on an unrelated citation about nursing education to satisfy the rule. The fix is to frame the reflection through a construct that genuinely needs citing.
- Naming a safe non-fear such as caring too much or working too hard, which leaves the strategy section with nothing real to solve.
- Answering 'how can you overcome it' with determination and positivity rather than a mechanism matched to the kind of fear you named.
- Telling three past experiences briefly when the prompt asks for one specific experience, which trades the depth the question is looking for.
- Describing that you overcame a past fear without saying how, when the how is the only part that transfers to this programme.
- Including a quotation. The course instructions explicitly forbid quotes and require paraphrase with citation.
- Claiming a single strategy reliably builds confidence, when the experimental evidence shows individual strategies were not sufficient on their own.
- Counting the reference list toward the 150-word minimum, which the instructions exclude.
Submission checklist
- All four parts are answered: what you look forward to, your greatest fear, how to overcome it, and one specific past experience.
- The fear named is genuine and specific enough to build a strategy on.
- The overcoming strategy is tied to a named mechanism and supported by a citation.
- Exactly one past experience is told, and it explains how you succeeded, not only that you did.
- At least two references appear, at least one a peer-reviewed professional journal article.
- In-text citations are present and in APA 7th edition.
- There are no quotations anywhere in the post.
- The post reaches 150 words excluding the reference list.
- Any claim about what builds confidence is bounded by what the cited evidence supports.
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